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Keep It Clean–Avoid the Undefined “It” Pronoun

By Erin Wright 2 Comments

The way we use words in everyday communication often fails within business writing. A prime example is the undefined it (technically called an unprecursed it). But, what is an undefined it,  you ask? Before we delve into the details, please see the excerpts below from the fictitious assembly manual for the Generic Chair (proudly manufactured and sold by the Generic Store):

Example A: It’s a good idea to collect all of the necessary tools before beginning assembly.

Example B: It is going to take approximately three hours for the glue to dry.

In both of these sentences, it is and it’s mean something along the lines of “in this situation” or “you should know.”  Their purpose is to introduce information: the person assembling the chair needs to collect the tools and allow the glue to dry for three hours.

However, the word it is a pronoun, and pronouns stand in for nouns or noun phrases. In the above examples, it doesn’t represent  anything specific. The sentences are much more effective when we eliminate the uncertainty:

Example A Rewrite: You should collect all of the necessary tools before beginning the assembly.

Example B Rewrite:  The glue will take approximately three hours to dry.

Now, it certainly does have a place in business writing, but only when the underlying meaning is clear. For example, “The Generic Store has lost 50 percent of its customers. It will be closing ten retail locations after the holiday season.” In this situation, it represents the Generic Store.

As mentioned above, people use the undefined it all of the time–in conversation, emails, informal writing, etc. And that usage is just fine because it usually doesn’t cause confusion. Yet, many language choices that are acceptable in casual environments can create ambiguity or misunderstandings in business writing. So, keep your pronouns clean. Define it.

 

Erin Wright is a freelance writer and editor in Chicago, Illinois. She specializes in general business content, marketing, blogs, web copy, and instructional material.

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  1. Lori says

    October 29, 2015 at 4:11 pm

    In this type of construction, is “it” really functioning as an undefined pronoun? This example seems more like an expletive construction. Although some of the words overlap with pronouns, I thought they were distinct.
    I’m approaching this topic from a translation perspective. Your explanation makes “it” seem almost like jargon or idiom, in that it’s used in place of a longer (and more specific) phrase.
    I agree that rewriting to avoid both undefined pronouns and expletive constructions is best, but wanted to get more information.

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    • Erin Wright says

      October 30, 2015 at 5:43 pm

      Hi, Lori. Your question is very intriguing! Garner’s Modern American Usage defines an expletive as a word or phrase (usually “it” and “there is”) that stands for a “delayed subject” (page 337). Unfortunately, the connection between the expletive and that delayed subject can get quite fuzzy, and I think you’re correct that Example A above could be labeled as an expletive construction rather than as an undefined pronoun because “idea” may be read as a delayed subject for “it.” However, “it” remains a pronoun whether it is defined, undefined, or used as an expletive. I will update this post as soon as I get a chance. Thank you!

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